Pitch Feedback (Blogpost Task 39)

After presenting our pitch to our teacher, we received feedback which included:

- include lots of different shots
- try not to use too much dialogue
- storyboard
- how are we going to demonstrate the bad act
- the font of the title

To solve these problems, we will:
- include a variety of different shots, we have taken ideas from youth dramas such as 'Bend it like Beckham' and we have illustrated shots we want to use on out storyboard

- we will try to limit the dialogue we use to make the film look better. As we are not actors, the use of dialogue may not be a good idea as it may ruin the film

- because we are doing our storyboard after feedback rather than before, we know that we need to include the different shot types and angles in our storyboard so we have a clear idea of what we are doing.

- in our group we have discussed how we are going to represent the bad acts that the main character will be invloved in. we will show this in our storyboard

- we have changed the font of the title to something more suitable, it also relates to our film and the theme behind it.