Below is the feedback I was given for the blogs I did so far:
Hi Jonathan
Just in case you haven't seen it on promonitor, here is your feedback from blogging health check 3 which was done over half term.
You have added some more work on planning but you still need to demonstrate that you have thought about the target audience. Look at the target audiences for some teen films (particular those that have influenced you) and consider how this compares to the target audience that you have in mind for your film.
You also need to include more reflection on the filming and editing that you have done. Make sure that you talk in detail about what has gone well and if you faced any challenges or needed to reshoot. You should also post any pictures that you have of filming and editing.
In general, you need to elaborate more in your posts and think more carefully about how you are presenting them.
Let me know if you have any questions
Phoebe
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